This is a complex question and I'm excited to pull it apart, because it gets down into the perceived disparity between art and commerce, and the value of enjoyment versus the cost of time. But I'm getting ahead of myself. Let's start off with how this question relates to creative writing.
A beta reader is an increasingly popular term to describe someone who is willing to read work prior to its publication and/or submission. This person is not there to edit the work, but rather, to react to it as a member of the audience. Considering the wealth of self-publishing options available now and the competitive nature of the marketplace, a beta reader is a valuable asset to have in your writer's desk, and you need look no further than groups on Absolute Write, Good Reads, or World Lit Café to find tons of people willing to be your free beta reader.
This annoys me. Here's why.
I've offered my services as a beta reader for free a few times (to friends and family). I'll go line-by-line. A short story of just ten pages will take two hours. Here's an example of what you might get out of a beta reader. When the volume is too loud, they'll let you know. If there was a scene they expected and never got to see, they'll let you know. Ideally, a beta reader is well-educated in storytelling technique. They'll hear flat dialogue. They'll recognize a sexist character.
I wouldn't offer my free services to a stranger for several reasons.
1) Some of these collectives cling to the principle that a beta reader "does it for the love," which turns being free into some kind of philosophy. Charging doesn't mean that you don't love to read. Charging means that you have a bookshelf crammed with half-read novels, and in your leisure (free) time, the first book for which you reach isn't going to be a first draft about which even the author isn't sure. I don't think most adults have the time to perform a proper beta reading for free.
Suffice it to say, the less experience and education you have writing, the more work your beta reader will end up doing, and the more sorely you'll need real help.
2) A proper beta reader isn't just a reader, but a reader with the entire audience in mind (including editors and agents), and a reader who writes constructive criticism of varying degrees. This is why reading ten pages will take them two hours.
"I don't like this!" shouldn't appear in their responses. "I don't like this because it glosses over the deeper issue of John's depression," would be a C-grade beta response. "I don't like this because it glosses over the deeper issue of John's depression. Because it would be out-of-key with the conversation, however, to truly discuss it, perhaps the details could manifest from his surroundings," is an A-grade beta reader.
If your beta reader is responding to singular lines and pages, rather than writing a bulk review at the conclusion of the piece, they absolutely deserve compensation.
3) When you pay for a service, you pay for multiple things. You're paying for their discretion. (Notice how I did not post up any direct samples of my beta reading, or of the piece involved.) If you have a free beta reader, a stranger, no contract, how secure is the work? What kind of legal claim would you have if the identity of the beta reader (for example, "beta1234") isn't possible to trace to the plagiarist you later confront? When you trust an individual with your intellectual property, it's important that you're aware of their identity, and it's important that the exchange is somehow documented. Otherwise, there might not be proof that you aren't the plagiarist yourself.
You're also paying for dedication and focus. Life is a hectic thing. Not everyone has the dedication to keep chipping at a book while the family dog is sick and work is going crazy and Facebook keeps blowing up their phone. A stranger who "works" for free is just as likely to never contact you again, especially if the little flaws we want a beta to find instead deter them from finishing.
4) Finally, let's talk about art. It's a common misconception that art is a spiritual endeavor that is sullied with commerce. The truth of the matter is that art is not only a spiritual endeavor but also a product and/or service. I used to sell shoes, and I enjoyed it. But I needed to be compensated for not only the service I was providing; I needed to be compensated for my time. The starving artist is best left as a trope and not a reality; like the car mechanic, everyone has a skillset that allows something to work, and storytellers are just as valid in that respect. It might be the case that we need art even more than we need transportation. Imagine a world devoid of art (including television, interior design, and fashion!) compared to a world devoid of transportation. In which would you rather live?
"Doing it for the love" is the modern version of "Art is a spiritual endeavor." I intensely dislike this notion because it turns artists into mystical creatures who don't need to eat and have infinite leisure time. It's unfair to perceive artists in this way. Football players don't go to the NFL for free, because their craft takes up too much time, just like with many artists. They can't function in that capacity without compensation.
People say, "Nothing's free." That's not exactly true. More accurately:
"You get what you pay for."
I've never patronized a beta reader, but I have seen poorly executed readings happen to colleagues. I'm not aware if they were free or not, but considering the quality, I'd bet they were. These reviews (of book-length projects) were only a few sentences long, and seemed, to me, cheap and patronizing, the equivalent of, "I really liked it!"
You may save yourself a lot of time (and time is money, as they say) by hiring a professional beta reader before submitting the book to the global marketplace for review, not to even mention the jaded reading glasses of editors and agents.
That having been said, if you can find a safe, thorough beta reader for free, more power to you. Personally, I would not trust an anonymous person without any proven credentials to handle my work in a way that will cost them significant time and careful thought. I feel that, for a bulk review at the end of a book, $20-50 would be fair, depending on how concise and explicit the review. For a critique that takes place page-by-page, for a project of 150 pages (with constructive reaction taking place on every page and being a small paragraph in length), I would expect a rate of $150-300.
Monday, June 22, 2015
Monday, May 11, 2015
The Importance of Being Logical (Causality, Blocking, and Pacing)
Today I'm going to talk about the human mind, and how we demand causality from life and its various portrayals, whether they be in film or text or whatever medium. Things must make sense. If they don't make sense, regardless of how cool the resultant scene, we feel above the action. Not only has the dream-like haze of immersion been utterly broken, but we're also now critical of the characters, the scene, and the author. Typically, we know when we're doing this, because the scene suddenly becomes much harder to write. We need to configure the physics of it, because it doesn't just materialize organically, the way that the other pages did.
Jeffery Deaver: "When I find myself frozen–whether I’m working on a brief passage in a novel or brainstorming about an entire book–it’s usually because I’m trying to shoehorn an idea into the passage or story where it has no place."
For example, I recently wrote the death scene of a beloved character. I wanted, desperately, for this character to die in an epic battle. Unfortunately, the character was also the victim of an intensifying and debilitating sickness. It simply wouldn't make sense for him to be in this high-risk environment where the action takes place, and it also does not reflect true experience. When someone is deathly ill, they don't then go on to perish in a blaze of glory, unless that final act of heroic sacrifice doesn't require a long walk. Much more often, these people die from that disease, and it isn't filled with the honor and dignity of impaling some beast and unchaining the damsel. Death by disease is bitter.
Ultimately, I had to let the character die in the way that was logical. He died of the disease that had been intensifying throughout the book, and the scene felt very, very right. Once I stopped trying to steer it based on my own prejudices ("But I want to write an epic battle scene!") and let the character become a real person in a real world, the story materialized on the page like anything else you allow to grow freely in its own direction. Many writers maintain that characters can "surprise" you, as if they have agency outside of your brain, and I agree. Of course, it's unlikely these characters exist as specters beyond the realm of consciousness, influencing our decisions as writers, but much more likely, our own minds demand that we follow logic, and in truth, we surprise ourselves. Sometimes you just don't know how various elements will evolve over the course of a story, but when it's all told, if you let it happen, it will feel right.
I started on a fantasy series with a heroine and a villain. Naturally. Sometime around the end of the second book, I realized that the heroine and the villain had... a lot of organic chemistry. ;) I let him be himself, and her be herself, and they fused well. In such a way that it would be dishonest as a writer to continue their parrying as if they were truly nothing but adversaries. As such, the subsequent books were written to reflect the development of a love triangle, and eventually, the heroine and villain ended up together. It was a very rewarding experience, and hugely different than it had been intended.
On a smaller scale, logic is also at the heart of pacing and "blocking," the stage term for the positioning of bodies. I daresay proper blocking is even more vital than pacing, which is saying a lot. Especially in scenes with high action and lots of movement, your reader is paying attention to the positions of all the characters with pinpoint accuracy. I mean, this is the only way to envision the scene, isn't it? As the writer, you probably are too, but should reread carefully to ensure that the attention to this detail is consistent throughout. Even something minor, like the redundant mention of a character hesitating, causes us a mental stutter and takes us from the fluidity of the scene. Clarity is important in anything you wish your reader to mentally see. You never want a confused reader, wondering how far apart these characters are. Little things matter.
We subconsciously track time (pacing) as well. It's a good idea to draw out a calendar of events and mark down the scenes as you go, so you, as the narrator, know with crystal clarity the timeline. It's okay if a character forgets, or lies, but the third-person perspective should just know. You should also pay attention to the length of time you spend in-scene at these points in the time-line. I once portrayed a character being hypnotized repeatedly. I wanted to convey this abuse accurately, the sense of lost time, the confusion of the character. I ended up cutting several of the scenes. Not only did it become redundant, but it was just too boring, trapped in a room and uncertain of what is going on. The rest of the story was much more exciting. So, learn from my mistakes: don't spend too many pages in the same room. At the end of the piece, you'll hopefully have a cast of characters who move with such speed and efficiency from scene to scene, the reader doesn't even notice how the days peel by.
Conversely, it would be weird to have a character find out she's six weeks pregnant in one chapter, and is then giving birth in the next, with no explanation of where that nine months went.
Jeffery Deaver: "When I find myself frozen–whether I’m working on a brief passage in a novel or brainstorming about an entire book–it’s usually because I’m trying to shoehorn an idea into the passage or story where it has no place."
For example, I recently wrote the death scene of a beloved character. I wanted, desperately, for this character to die in an epic battle. Unfortunately, the character was also the victim of an intensifying and debilitating sickness. It simply wouldn't make sense for him to be in this high-risk environment where the action takes place, and it also does not reflect true experience. When someone is deathly ill, they don't then go on to perish in a blaze of glory, unless that final act of heroic sacrifice doesn't require a long walk. Much more often, these people die from that disease, and it isn't filled with the honor and dignity of impaling some beast and unchaining the damsel. Death by disease is bitter.
Ultimately, I had to let the character die in the way that was logical. He died of the disease that had been intensifying throughout the book, and the scene felt very, very right. Once I stopped trying to steer it based on my own prejudices ("But I want to write an epic battle scene!") and let the character become a real person in a real world, the story materialized on the page like anything else you allow to grow freely in its own direction. Many writers maintain that characters can "surprise" you, as if they have agency outside of your brain, and I agree. Of course, it's unlikely these characters exist as specters beyond the realm of consciousness, influencing our decisions as writers, but much more likely, our own minds demand that we follow logic, and in truth, we surprise ourselves. Sometimes you just don't know how various elements will evolve over the course of a story, but when it's all told, if you let it happen, it will feel right.
I started on a fantasy series with a heroine and a villain. Naturally. Sometime around the end of the second book, I realized that the heroine and the villain had... a lot of organic chemistry. ;) I let him be himself, and her be herself, and they fused well. In such a way that it would be dishonest as a writer to continue their parrying as if they were truly nothing but adversaries. As such, the subsequent books were written to reflect the development of a love triangle, and eventually, the heroine and villain ended up together. It was a very rewarding experience, and hugely different than it had been intended.
On a smaller scale, logic is also at the heart of pacing and "blocking," the stage term for the positioning of bodies. I daresay proper blocking is even more vital than pacing, which is saying a lot. Especially in scenes with high action and lots of movement, your reader is paying attention to the positions of all the characters with pinpoint accuracy. I mean, this is the only way to envision the scene, isn't it? As the writer, you probably are too, but should reread carefully to ensure that the attention to this detail is consistent throughout. Even something minor, like the redundant mention of a character hesitating, causes us a mental stutter and takes us from the fluidity of the scene. Clarity is important in anything you wish your reader to mentally see. You never want a confused reader, wondering how far apart these characters are. Little things matter.
We subconsciously track time (pacing) as well. It's a good idea to draw out a calendar of events and mark down the scenes as you go, so you, as the narrator, know with crystal clarity the timeline. It's okay if a character forgets, or lies, but the third-person perspective should just know. You should also pay attention to the length of time you spend in-scene at these points in the time-line. I once portrayed a character being hypnotized repeatedly. I wanted to convey this abuse accurately, the sense of lost time, the confusion of the character. I ended up cutting several of the scenes. Not only did it become redundant, but it was just too boring, trapped in a room and uncertain of what is going on. The rest of the story was much more exciting. So, learn from my mistakes: don't spend too many pages in the same room. At the end of the piece, you'll hopefully have a cast of characters who move with such speed and efficiency from scene to scene, the reader doesn't even notice how the days peel by.
Conversely, it would be weird to have a character find out she's six weeks pregnant in one chapter, and is then giving birth in the next, with no explanation of where that nine months went.
Sunday, April 26, 2015
Writer's Block and Process
I've been told before that my perspective of writer's block is incorrect. I've been told that writer's block is a zero energy total inability to make something happen on the page, "like depression, but for writing." As if writing is not a part of us, but an external entity that visits itself upon us, as if the blocked writer has been dumped by the muses of old, and whether or not they return has little to do with your own effort. As if you've texted and texted her (mentally, of course, but not with literal words, since those have been robbed from you), and she just won't call you back.
This definition of writer's block doesn't work for me. I suppose there are special cases, such as authors in solitary confinement or authors who suffer brain damage, but I don't believe this definition is accurate for the common scenario which is titled "writer's block," wherein an average writer like you or me simply stares at a page for a day or two, or a month or two, as the case may be. We are people in decent health, people surrounded by inspiration whether or not we take it, people who possess the skills required to write the words, even poorly. Most people have access to lots of tools which may stimulate their creative process.
I'm not the type of person who just accepts what appears to be as fixed and divorced from me. I'm a big believer in the power of positive thought and individual effort, and in the power to control and structure your own life.
I see the craft of writing as a muscle which strengthens with direct practice, and like a muscle, you'd be surprised how strong it can become once you determine that you will meet your challenges.
Admittedly, the first thing you write coming out of a dry spell will probably be bad. As William Stafford said, "Lower your standards and keep writing."
I also highly recommend taking walks and meditation. Moments of relaxation are hugely instrumental in inspiration. While you cannot be inspired while constantly relaxed and never chipping away at that plot hole or climax or what have you, you can also not be inspired if you never stop stressing over it. So stress, stress, and then take a deep breath and walk away. Let it play idly through your thoughts and you'll be surprised how often HUGE breakthroughs will hit mid-shower.
If there are toxic stressors in your life which you identify as cropping up between yourself and your ability to write, put tangible space between yourself and them.
A common footnote in the story of a rut is that the subject thinks about solutions, but never actually physically does anything differently.
So don't just think about turning off your phone, or disconnecting your Internet, or going on that walk, or spitting out that opening paragraph you just know isn't going to sing and sparkle the way you hope. I know athletic footwear never wrote a best-selling novel, but in times of despair, I turn to the words of NIKE.
JUST DO IT.
This definition of writer's block doesn't work for me. I suppose there are special cases, such as authors in solitary confinement or authors who suffer brain damage, but I don't believe this definition is accurate for the common scenario which is titled "writer's block," wherein an average writer like you or me simply stares at a page for a day or two, or a month or two, as the case may be. We are people in decent health, people surrounded by inspiration whether or not we take it, people who possess the skills required to write the words, even poorly. Most people have access to lots of tools which may stimulate their creative process.
I'm not the type of person who just accepts what appears to be as fixed and divorced from me. I'm a big believer in the power of positive thought and individual effort, and in the power to control and structure your own life.
I see the craft of writing as a muscle which strengthens with direct practice, and like a muscle, you'd be surprised how strong it can become once you determine that you will meet your challenges.
Admittedly, the first thing you write coming out of a dry spell will probably be bad. As William Stafford said, "Lower your standards and keep writing."
I also highly recommend taking walks and meditation. Moments of relaxation are hugely instrumental in inspiration. While you cannot be inspired while constantly relaxed and never chipping away at that plot hole or climax or what have you, you can also not be inspired if you never stop stressing over it. So stress, stress, and then take a deep breath and walk away. Let it play idly through your thoughts and you'll be surprised how often HUGE breakthroughs will hit mid-shower.
If there are toxic stressors in your life which you identify as cropping up between yourself and your ability to write, put tangible space between yourself and them.
A common footnote in the story of a rut is that the subject thinks about solutions, but never actually physically does anything differently.
So don't just think about turning off your phone, or disconnecting your Internet, or going on that walk, or spitting out that opening paragraph you just know isn't going to sing and sparkle the way you hope. I know athletic footwear never wrote a best-selling novel, but in times of despair, I turn to the words of NIKE.
JUST DO IT.
Sunday, April 19, 2015
Authorial Distance and Disconnection (Or Filters)
Authorial distance is a judgment call that a self-aware writer makes early in the scene. I was once told to imagine the narrator as a camera, and that analogy works well for me.
Some scenes are better served by a panoramic view. Perhaps you want to capture the mood of an evening across an entire town; you'd seek unifying activity amongst the myriad subjects, so as not to focus too closely on any individual ("the women lounged with their paperback heartthrobs"), use a "soft lens" to convey more general detail, and, as a narrator, you'd probably be inclined toward omniscience. I've rarely used this method, but Kurt Vonnegut is one my favorite authors, and he had a marked distance to his prose. For all its beauty, it was distinctly outside of the character, and at times, it was so distant it could gloss over the entire planet.
Comparatively, there is the opposite end of the spectrum, where the camera is more of a chip implanted into the brain of the main character, and your reader only perceives their experiences as viscerally and intimately as possible. With this authorial distance, or lack thereof, you'd likely employ stream-of-consciousness to relay the natural movement of thought, openly delve into raw styles seldom explored in fiction, and convey sensation as it is experienced firsthand. ("Son of a bitch! Cody's hand flexed, stinging, and the pot of mushrooms clanged onto the kitchen linoleum.") You'd consider your prose to double as the eye of the character, so if they're looking at something, you're describing it without noting that they're looking at it. For example, "I sat down beside him. His sneakers were red and our hands were too close." That tells you a lot without telling you that this character is looking down, or telling you how uncomfortable they are.
If you move instead to describing the eyes of the perspective ("My eyes flash from our hands--too close--to our shoes--too close"), it doesn't necessarily lose its impact or significance but it does move the camera just outside of their body.
There are plenty of steps in between, though. It just depends on what type of story you want to tell. If you're starting an action/adventure/mystery with a single perspective, you'll probably want to nestle up as close as possible, but in a political drama rife with intrigues, you're better served to move from one event of consequence to the next, regardless of which characters are involved, so your reader is overwhelmed by the amount of betrayal, so many other characters painfully unaware!
All of this is fine because it's all conscious, and regardless, it doesn't actually hinder the storytelling. Your plot and characters may have been better suited to a different method, but it's really just another way of telling the same story, and a good story is... well... good. There is something like authorial distance but not, because it places an unintentional disconnection, and the disconnection isn't between the reader and the character but between the reader and the narrator. These are filters, and one of the main reasons I always recommend rereading one's work, preferably aloud. When a writer uses a filter, a throwaway verb phrase, it places a small but vital measure between the reader and the story, usually "filtered" through the main characters themselves. For example, "She noticed that the mail still hadn't been opened." Now consider: "There sat the mail. Still on the counter. Unopened." Hunt down those meaningless filters and cut them out, placing your reader directly into the story rather than caught in the intermediary of the character. "He smelled the exhaust lacing the air, but he couldn't make out the plates." Compare to: "Exhaust laced the air. Its license plate shrank and blurred."
Some scenes are better served by a panoramic view. Perhaps you want to capture the mood of an evening across an entire town; you'd seek unifying activity amongst the myriad subjects, so as not to focus too closely on any individual ("the women lounged with their paperback heartthrobs"), use a "soft lens" to convey more general detail, and, as a narrator, you'd probably be inclined toward omniscience. I've rarely used this method, but Kurt Vonnegut is one my favorite authors, and he had a marked distance to his prose. For all its beauty, it was distinctly outside of the character, and at times, it was so distant it could gloss over the entire planet.
Comparatively, there is the opposite end of the spectrum, where the camera is more of a chip implanted into the brain of the main character, and your reader only perceives their experiences as viscerally and intimately as possible. With this authorial distance, or lack thereof, you'd likely employ stream-of-consciousness to relay the natural movement of thought, openly delve into raw styles seldom explored in fiction, and convey sensation as it is experienced firsthand. ("Son of a bitch! Cody's hand flexed, stinging, and the pot of mushrooms clanged onto the kitchen linoleum.") You'd consider your prose to double as the eye of the character, so if they're looking at something, you're describing it without noting that they're looking at it. For example, "I sat down beside him. His sneakers were red and our hands were too close." That tells you a lot without telling you that this character is looking down, or telling you how uncomfortable they are.
If you move instead to describing the eyes of the perspective ("My eyes flash from our hands--too close--to our shoes--too close"), it doesn't necessarily lose its impact or significance but it does move the camera just outside of their body.
There are plenty of steps in between, though. It just depends on what type of story you want to tell. If you're starting an action/adventure/mystery with a single perspective, you'll probably want to nestle up as close as possible, but in a political drama rife with intrigues, you're better served to move from one event of consequence to the next, regardless of which characters are involved, so your reader is overwhelmed by the amount of betrayal, so many other characters painfully unaware!
All of this is fine because it's all conscious, and regardless, it doesn't actually hinder the storytelling. Your plot and characters may have been better suited to a different method, but it's really just another way of telling the same story, and a good story is... well... good. There is something like authorial distance but not, because it places an unintentional disconnection, and the disconnection isn't between the reader and the character but between the reader and the narrator. These are filters, and one of the main reasons I always recommend rereading one's work, preferably aloud. When a writer uses a filter, a throwaway verb phrase, it places a small but vital measure between the reader and the story, usually "filtered" through the main characters themselves. For example, "She noticed that the mail still hadn't been opened." Now consider: "There sat the mail. Still on the counter. Unopened." Hunt down those meaningless filters and cut them out, placing your reader directly into the story rather than caught in the intermediary of the character. "He smelled the exhaust lacing the air, but he couldn't make out the plates." Compare to: "Exhaust laced the air. Its license plate shrank and blurred."
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